It's not a major problem when they link their work directly to earlier stories.
A direct link might not always be desirable to readers
distracting
It's when you drop coincidental names into the book that things get bad
flourish
There are a number of names that have stopped being allusions and have become spoilers.
distraction
No one is going to be surprised
Step away from the spoilers
Unflattering Comparison
rarely subtle enough
Rarely can the piece of work top the name.
well-suited to the material
subtle
an expansion of the usual list of names used in fiction stories
too many shout-outs
an invitation to judge the material harshly
Killed By Overuse
minor character allusions
good the first few times around
thoroughly worn-out
the default name
tend to cast long shadows
literary allusions
The prohibition of names in fiction has to depend on context.
overly common names
creator names
what you call your main female character when you realize you can't call her Main Female Character
It has turned, hydra-like, from a name into a multi-headed monster
ubiquitous, and therefore meaningless
It's a way to make sure your main character won't make an impression on literary consciousness, but will go through the story with a serviceable everywoman demeanor.
In an effort to make their characters more attractive without having to do the leg work of natural character development
superficial
It's when a trait exists more to make somebody stand out than to develop them as a character that it starts going into Mary Sue territory (unless it's Played for Laughs)
even if she hasn't done or said anything to make them feel that way about her
named after the author
Mary Sue doesn't have to actually do anything to be considered a good person, she just is good
she brings more good into the world simply by existing
A massive amount of time gets spent on describing her every feature
major plot points (that aren't solved by the new girl) are done entirely off screen
tends to appear in all of the works by a particular author
persuasive, regardless of the actual content of their conversations
her opinions are just better
She gets Purple Prose
The author takes personal offense at any criticism of the character
Friend to All Living Things
ither brave and cheerful (despite her past), or unnecessarily mopey and depressed
an unusual spelling of a normal name
Incorruptible
unaware of the possibility of temptation
generic Japanese name
the author will create a fan club for her own Mary Sue
aggressively ships the Sue with a canon character and makes a fan club for that.
Nobody will call her out on her abrasive, casually abusive behavior
Often results in name which doesn't mean quite what the author intended
she "puts them in their place."
her every action gets a heavy emphasis
Over a hundred illustrations of a single OC is an obsession.
Her "major flaws" will be stubbornness and a bad temper. These will only ever help her, never hurt her — because she's always right, so whatever cause she dedicates herself to with such stubbornness will be a good cause, and whoever she loses her temper with will deserve it.
New words get made up to describe her
combination Japanese/Western-type name
practically a six-foot-high neon sign flashing I'M A MARY SUE when it comes to fanfic
the author knows what's going on and only wrote the parts that he/she wanted to fetish-obsess over.
the name is inconsistent within their particular culture
everybody is too busy taking an interest in the new girl's life
Mary Sue claims she wishes she was normal even when there's no actual downside to her powers.
overly long, complicated, usually Meaningful Name
Insanelylongandhardtopronounce
Inexplicable and/or poorly defined abilities
When the character is off screen, if ever, the other characters are still talking about her
only there to make the character seem even more awesome
Clumsiness is a popular flaw
it is never inconvenient, and only ever embarassing in a cute way
if she isn't already skilled at something, she'll pick it up in a fraction of the time required
Magical powers similar to what the other characters have, only with the limitations removed.
A perfect singing voice
Extreme proficiency with an instrument
if it's a Song Fic, she'll possess the ability to compose her own lyrics and songs
Speaks several languages fluently
Skilled in a type of martial arts
random magical powers
Absurd natural athletic ability
excellent fashion sense, even if she's meant to be a rough-and-tumble, Tom Boy type who doesn't care about that sort of thing
Evanna named her cats after Harry Potter characters: she has a cat named Luna and one named Dumbledore. She also had another cat named Crookshanks, now deceased.
She is a frequent visitor to the Harry Potter fan site MuggleNet
Evanna likes making beaded jewelery. She made the radish earrings that her character wears in Order of the Phoenix herself.
she also made a bracelet worn by Luna when she attended the Slug Club Christmas Party. The bracelet depicted a hare, like her Patronus
She was given a hare and moon pendant by J. K. Rowling.
"Do you think about the film when you write?" Rowling answered "No", but that "the only actor or actress who has ever, ever intruded while writing was Evanna Lynch, who is absolutely perfect as Luna.
the caster must concentrate upon the object they wish to summon
caster doesn't necessarily need to know the location if they say the name of the object to be summoned
also used as a quicker way to find objects
a quick and effective way of fishing
summoning charm is limited only to items and small animals, as it has been shown incapable to summon people
it is still possible for items to be enchanted so as to be impossible to summon
Age Line
Aguamenti (Aguamenti Charm)
Aguamenti
Alohomora
not effective on doors bewitched to resist this spell
open and unlock doors
Anapneo
Clears the target's airway if it is blocked
Aresto Momentum
Used to slow down an object or being that is moving
Ascendio
Lifts the caster high into the air.
Cave Inimicum
Warns of any approaching enemies
Cheering Charm
Causes the person upon whom the spell was cast to become happy and contented
Colloportus
will magically lock a door, preventing it from being opened by Muggle means
Colovaria
used to change one's hair colour and style
Depulso (Banishing Charm)
This spell is said to turn its target to stone
Episkey
Used to heal relatively minor injuries
Evanesco (Vanishing Spell)
Expecto Patronum (Patronus Charm)
Expelliarmus (Disarming Charm)
Featherweight Charm
Fidelius Charm
enables secret information to be hidden within the soul of the recipient, known as a Secret-Keeper
not even those who have the Secret revealed to them can reveal it to others
Those who have been informed of the secret by the Secret-Keeper are unable to tell the secret to those who are unaware of it
Finite (Incantatem)
Negates spells or the effects of spells
Firestorm
conjures a ring of fire
The caster is able to control the movement and direction of the flames with enough precision to strike specific targets
Partis Temporus can create a gap in the flames to allow safe passage through
Flame-Freezing Charm
creating only a gentle, tickling sensation instead of burns
Causes fire to become harmless
Geminio
Creates a duplicate of any object cast upon
Gripping Charm
Harmonia Nectere Passus
Causes the object/person in a vanishing cabinet to pass in its twin/other vanishing cabinet.
Herbivicus
Makes flowers and plants bloom in an instant
Homenum Revelio
Reveals human presence in the vicinity of the caster
Homorphus Charm
Causes an Animagus or transfigured object to assume its normal shape
Immobulus (Freezing Charm)
Renders target immobile
Imperio (Imperius Curse)
Places the subject in a dream-like state, in which he or she is utterly subject to the will of the caster
those who are strong willed may learn to resist it
Imperturbable Charm
Makes objects such as doors impenetrable (by everything, including sounds and objects).
Impervius (Impervius Charm)
This spell makes something repel (literally, become impervious to) substances and outside forces including water.
Incarcerous
Ties someone or something up with ropes
Incendio
Produces fire
Legilimens (Legilimency Spell)
Allows the caster to delve into the mind of the victim, allowing the caster to see the memories, thoughts, and emotions of the victim.
Liberacorpus
Locomotor (name of object)
auses the named object to rise in the air and move around at the will of the caster
Lumos
Creates a narrow beam of light that shines from the wand's tip, like a torch.
Muffliato
fills peoples' ears with an unidentifiable buzzing to keep them from hearing nearby conversations.
Obliviate (Memory Charm)
Obscuro
Causes a blindfold to appear over the victim's eyes, obstructing their view of their surroundings.
Orchideous
Makes a bouquet of flowers appear out of the caster's wand
Reparifors
Partis Temporus
Creates a temporary gap through protective magical barriers
Periculum
Creates red sparks/flares to shoot from the users wand
Permanent Sticking Charm
Placement Charm
Point Me (Four-Point Spell)
Portus
Turns an object into a port-key
Protean Charm
Causes copies of an object to be remotely affected by changes made to the original.
Protego (Shield Charm)
The Shield Charm causes minor to moderate jinxes, curses, and hexes to rebound upon the attacker.
Protego Horribilis
A powerful shield charm against dark magic.
Protego Maxima
A powerful shield charm against dark magic. Was so powerful that it did also disintegrate people that came too close.
Protego Totalum
Casts a shield charm over a small area that will not let anything pass through. Except for the Unforgivable Curses: Avada Kedavra, Imperio and Crucio .
Quietus
Makes a magically magnified voice return to normal.
Sonorus
Refilling Charm
Refills whatever the caster points at
Daydream Charm
Reverts minor magically-induced ailments, such as paralysis and poisoning.
Relashio
A spell used to make the subject release what ever it is holding or binding.
Rennervate
revives a stunned person
Reparo
Used to repair objects.
Rictusempra (Tickling Charm)
Scourgify (Scouring Charm)
Silencio (Silencing Charm)
Sonorous Charm
Sonorus
Magnifies the spell caster's voice when one's wand is pointing to the side of the caster's neck.
Spongify (Cushioning Charm)
Stealth Sensoring Spell
Detects those under magical disguise
Stupefy (Stunning Spell)
Supersensory Charm
causes the caster to have enhanced senses, or to be able to sense things they would not normally sense.
Switching Spell
Causes two objects to be switched for one another
Tergeo
A spell used to siphon matter from a surface, eg. blood, ink, dust, etc.
Unbreakable Vow
Causes a vow taken by a witch or wizard to be inviolable; if they should break it, the consequence is death.
Unbreakable Charm
Makes something unbreakable.
Undetectable Extension Charm
Causes a container's capacity to be increased, without changing the object's appearance on the outside.
Verdimillious
A spell that shoots green sparks at the end of the wand.
Cal is utterly brilliant. He also has an awkward body language and very little regards to things like tact and the like, and the first line of his second book was, ‘Let me be clear. I understand very little, least of all the people close to me.’
Briefcase Full of Money: What Dr. Lightman purported to be trying to hide when he tested Ria Torres at the airport. After he and Dr. Foster end their hiring pitch, they leave behind the briefcase; when Ria calls them on the "forgotten" item, Lightman says nonchalantly that's her hiring bonus.
Last Name Basis: Characters address each other by last name more often than first name.
Lie Detector: Dr. Lightman points out all the ways polygraphs suck. One of them involves getting a guy to fail the control questions by use of a woman in a sexy outfit.
The daughter specifically asks Dr. Lightman not to do any "covert" lie detection. She neglected to include "overt" lie detection as well.
Loophole Abuse
Cal and Ria's techniques of information gathering waltz into the distinctly unusual.